Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Books, Passion and Friendship

Please welcome Megan as our most recent guest blogger!

I want to tell you a story.

Hi, my name is Megan. I am mildly willing to admit I may have a problem with books. Problem is probably not the best term for it. I have an obsession, a mania, a philia. Some might call it a Gentle Madness.

In my home I have over 5,000 books. Books that I have never read. Waiting in piles for me to find time and energy for consumption. These piles around me used to be piles of guilt, but it was fairly recently that I discovered, even on the day I die, I want plenty of books to choose from. There is a certain sadness in thinking about only having one book left to enjoy in this mortal world.

But these piles of books are not my story.

Or not the story of today. Once, in my dark past, I used to be a person with lots of piles of books and a blog. These things were the entirety of my book passion. I was silent in my love for books until I was able to start describing them with poorly chosen sparse words. It was through my blog and twitter that I was able to connect with  other passionate book lovers. It was through these connections that I was really able to hone down what type of books I loved to read and talk about.

There is something a little hipster about it, but I loved dystopian fiction before it was cool. Before anyone even knew the term as a concept or genre. And that was how Lenore and I "met". Lenore Appelhans is a dystopian reading, cat loving, book person. We blogged about LOTS of books and read and discussed a few together. But Lenore lived in Germany, so opportunities for our physical lives to cross paths were slim.

One day I up and bought a bookstore, and one day she announced a book deal.

 The way the world converges is just fascinating to me. My bookstore has at least 15,000 books piled up around me. The guilt is gone and the hope that these books will go to homes where they will be enjoyed, loved, devoured, consumed fills my daily life.

The special honor of  selling the books by friends who weren't published when we first connected. As it happened Lenore's first book was a dystopian young adult novel (these are my favorite kind of books) AND I now owned a bookstore where I could push it upon the masses. In a nice synchronicity of it all, Lenore's book came out on my birthday.

This weekend we were able to meet in person for the first time.

And that is my poorly written, meandering story. The way that life can be kissed with kismet and that the form of realty can have completion like that of a fiction.

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Megan O’Sullivan realized her life’s dream on May 10th 2012 when she purchased a used book store in Cedar City, Utah. Born and raised in Connecticut, she moved to Cedar City in 1999 back when she was young and foolish. It is still, to this day, one of the best bad decisions she ever made. You can read her rarely updated blog at poseysessions.blogspot.com and find her on Twitter at @poseysessions.

Monday, October 20, 2014

Quality Characterization

I recently saw the play Wicked while on a quick girl's trip to Vegas. There were all sorts of things that sent my writing brain on fire, from the layout of the theater, to the people attending the play (including the woman who had *significant enhancements* and wanted to share with all in attendance), to the production itself.

But each time I think back over the experience, I find myself marveling at the characterization.

If you have seen the play, you know that it centers around two women - Elphaba and Glinda. They are as opposite as two people could be, but as the play progresses, the audience can't help but laugh and long with them. The whole first act, Glinda has energy and popularity to burn with significant over-dramatization of ditziness. And Elphaba is quiet and reserved because of her (spoiler alert) green skin that has made her an outcast, but we get to see her in quiet moments depicting incredible compassion.


One of the reasons I like to go to plays is because the characterization has to be spot on. Sure, there are some tricks of the stage, but if the character can't carry the play, there is no play. Take your favorite play and think of your favorite character. Then ask yourself how many other people, in how many other countries, like that same character? Does the play have five years of success? Ten? More?

Why?

If we think about well known play characters - Phantom, Val Jean, Mary Poppins, Eliza Doolittle, all of them have qualities that make us love them, and things we wish they would do differently (I hate that Mary Poppins leaves Bert).

It would have been incredibly bizarre to see Elphaba in pink just as it would be ridiculous for Glinda to suddenly lose touch with fashion. Phantom will never dance at a disco, Val Jean isn't a practical joker, Mary Poppins would never pop a hip while walking away and Eliza Doolittle won't be releasing a rap album at the conclusion of any play. The characterization we envision for our characters needs to be the same - and strong enough that someone proposing something that goes against our character's nature will be completely clear.

That doesn't mean a character won't undergo changes - they will because people do. But it needs to stay true to characterization in a way that keeps the change plausible.

What are your favorite sources for character inspiration? What are your favorite character transitions?

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Tasha Seegmiller is a mom to three kids and high school English teacher in Southern Utah. She writes contemporary women’s fiction with a dash of magic. Her loves include Diet Coke, owls, chocolate and cinnamon bears. She is an editor for the Women's Fiction Writers Association quarterly newsletter and can be found here.

Friday, October 17, 2014

Meeting Your Daily Writing Goals: Accountability

You have a deadline coming up.You know how many words you need to write each day to meet that deadline. You have your headphones and your beverage of choice on hand. How do you stay accountable to those daily writing goals?



Accountability and group reporting

My writing group and I have a Facebook message thread that we use to bounce ideas back and forth. This month, we started an accountability exercise. It's simple. At the end of each day, we report in our word counts or progress with other writing-related goals (e.g., writing a synopsis, working on an outline, revising a chapter). I am speaking for the others based on their daily reported progress -- having to report in to the group on a daily basis has been highly motivating for all of us.

Some suggestions to make group accountability exercises work:

- Celebrate each others' successes.
- Provide encouragement when others don't meet their goals.
- Be honest with your self-reporting.
- Don't make excuses.
- Give yourself allowances for those hard days. You're only human.
- Don't give up.


There are other daily/regular writing groups that can you may utilize to accomplish the same sorts of things as my group's message thread.

Write Club: A Twitter-based group where writers band together from all over the world on Friday night (or at other times throughout the week) to do 30 minute sprints. Word counts are reported in using the hashtag #WriteClub. Follow the Twitter account @FriNightWrites for sprint prompts and visit their website for schedule of sprinting times.

5amWritersClub: Is morning writing more of your thing? Reporting your daily word count using the hashtag #5amWritersClub will connect you to a group of highly motivated morning writers like yourself! Check out their website for their story and the history of the hashtag.

Do you have a writing community that helps you stay accountable? Please comment below!




Helen Boswell loved to get lost in the pages of a story from the time she could sound out the words. She credits her dad, an avid fiction reader, with encouraging her to read all of the books on his shelves from the time she was a teenager. Originally from upstate New York, Helen spent much of her early adult life tromping around in Buffalo, NYC, Toronto, and Las Vegas, those cities now serving as inspiration for the dark and gritty backdrops of her stories. An author of both urban fantasy and contemporary romance, she loves to read and write characters that come to life with their beauty, flaws, and all. She is the author of YA urban fantasies MYTHOLOGY, THE WICKED, and NA contemporary romance LOSING ENOUGH.

Thursday, October 16, 2014

50 Questions for Your Outline

I have been working on the outline for my WIP for the last month. 

Actually (*cough*cough*) it's been...more than a month. 

Anyway, I'm using Tasha's brilliant technique and I'm LOVING IT. Seriously. It has changed the way I think about EVERYTHING. (Ok. Maybe not everything. I hated pickled beets before. Hate them now. How can my husband even put those near his lips?!) 

But I’ll tell you what, I’m still struggling with this plotting beast, trying to make all these scenes and characters and THINGS combine into a satisfying story that makes sense? And keeps moving? And changes the main character? And is full of emotions and all the senses and... And! And! And!

Wow. It’s a lot, right?

So, I went through loads and loads of notes in my WorkshopJournal. I scanned a few articles online. I got some advice from other writers. And I put together this list of questions to ask myself about my outline.(These would also be excellent questions for a cruddy first draft.)

 


1: What is the conflict?

2: Can you deepen the conflict?

3: Can you suck other characters into the main character’s problems, thereby broadening the conflict?
 
4: How do you hook your readers on page one?

5: What are the mysteries in your story?

6: Do you have a foil character which exposes the main character’s flaws and/or strengths?

7: Does your main character start in a hole wanting something?

8: What is getting in her way?

9: Why does she want what she wants?

10: What is the inciting incident?

11: What are the sub-plots?

12: What character flaws are stopping the main character from getting what he wants?

13: What external forces are stopping the character from getting what he wants?

14: How does the main character try to fix her problems?

15: What are the consequences of her attempt?

16: How does she try to fix it the next time?

17: And then what are the consequences?

18: How does she attempt to fix the problem for the third time? Is her attempt an all or nothing goal?

19: What mistakes does your main character make?

20: What is the mood of your story?

21: What is your setting?

22: Is your setting unique?

23: Is there a way to push it, to make the setting different?

24: Do you have misdirection in your story? Any red herrings? Will your readers think they know what is going to happen? But then you trick them?

25: What are the surprises and twists in your story?

26: Does your story start with action?

27: What kind of plot does your story have?

28: Are each of your characters unique?

29: What makes them special?

30: What are your characters’ secrets?

31: Have you created a sympathetic main character? How?

32: What do your characters fear?

33: Is your story building up to something big? Can you make it bigger? 

34: Is every scene more exciting/interesting than the scene before?

35: Who/what is your antagonist?

36: Why is he/it doing what he’s/it is doing?

37: How can you make your main character’s voice unique?

38: Is the story constantly moving forward? How?

39: Does every character serve a purpose?

40: Do you have any characters you could combine in order to lessen the chance that you're creating character soup?

41: How do the events affect and change the main character? 

42: What tools does your main character have to gain in order to win in the end?

43: How do you make the climax the big thing?

44: Do you have a ticking time bomb? If so, what is it? How does it escalate the tension? 

45: What are your characters’ back stories?

46: How do their back stories affect their actions?

47: What is the history of your setting?

48: How does it affect the story?

49:  What mistakes does your main character make? And what does he learn from them? 

50: What is your story's theme?


What questions do you ask about your outline or first draft? 

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  Erin Shakespear writes middle grade fantasy full of quirky creatures, magic, and strange adventures. With six kids, her days are full of quirky creatures, magic, strange adventures, and…loads of diapers. She also likes to dabble at photography, sewing, jewelry-making, and pretending she’s a grand artist. She is the southern Utah coordinator for the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators.

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Failure and Knowledge

It takes me about 7.62 times of starting a story to get it close to right. It will feel a little right, but then not, repeat, repeat, repeat. I'm normally not a fan of go back and edit because progress gets thwarted, but if the beginning is really, really off, there isn't enough in the middle or end to get it back on track. 

I spend a LOT of time in the beginning thinking, researching, reading, thinking. And each time that I have to start over, the whisperings of failure start appearing in my mind. 

"What if I never get this on track?"

"What if this isn't really a story?"

"What if my characters are meh?"

"What if I'm not really a writer?"

"What if I'm the biggest fraud that ever lived and my family has had to deal with me ignoring them and I have put all this time into something and cried tears and laughed joys and all of it ends up with me being a great big sucking loser?"

Ahem. That last one may be an exaggeration. Maybe.

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My high school writing students are finishing their second story of the year and they are starting to know enough to understand the story isn't where they want it to be, or to feel that something isn't working, but they don't know (or read) enough to know what and why and how to fix it. We do a couple days in class of what we call "Decrapification" where they have the chance to edit and tweak and fix and ask me questions before the final is due. I can see the stress on their faces as they recognize what they just wrote might not be the next multi-million dollar novel. 

My daughter recently performed a piano duet with her cousin for some judges. They felt their two pieces were where they needed to be, played reasonably well, bowed, and sat down while the rest of the students in the session had their turn to perform. One of the other partners played a piece that was the same as my daughter's. 

They played it better. 

And I'm so glad they did. 

As she was sitting there, my daughter commented on dynamics, speed, enjoyment in the performance, etc. She is starting to know enough about music to understand the elements in her performing that weren't as good as the second one. She saw where she did some things better, but how those some things didn't count as much when the bigger elements (playing up to speed for one) weren't present. 

I can't think of a single author who, either while writing or going through their first edit, doesn't make comments about how it is splotchy, or too big, or too vague, or, or, or. Sometimes they can identify on their own what needs to be fixed, sometimes they have to rely on supporters/editors/readers to point it out. 

But all of them learn something during every single book.

But for most of us, that failure that lingers in our minds is an invitation to learn - learn more about the craft, about the characters, about the business, the writing life, the time it really takes to accomplish a goal, what we, as the creator, need to do to pursue and not punish. Those doubts that creep in should be greeted with a "Well, so and so does it well, and I might not know how, but I know they do." Self-degradation isn't the highest form of productivity and bemoaning that something is wrong doesn't make it better. It is dedication to continually improving that makes well-known authors well known.

What do you do when failures arise? Any favorite resources when the learning needs to be amplified?


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Tasha Seegmiller is a mom to three kids and high school English teacher in Southern Utah. She writes contemporary women’s fiction with a dash of magic. Her loves include Diet Coke, owls, chocolate and cinnamon bears. She is an editor for the Women's Fiction Writers Association quarterly newsletter and can be found here

Monday, October 13, 2014

Getting Over Writer’s Block

We are delighted to welcome a new monthly contributor Emily Manwaring!

I broke up with my novel at the beginning of the year. I had thought it was “the one”—I’d worked on it in my spare time for six whole years [writing and rewriting and changing things so many times, I could write a book about how not to write a book], riding the roller coaster of “this is working” followed closely by, “this isn't working,”  “I have chills,” and “what rubbish.”

I felt thrilled and validated when a publishing company accepted it.  But when the time came to sign on the dotted line (think of me at the altar ready to make my vows) the deal fell through.

What surprised me most was how un-devastated I was. (I suppose this is a good indication I wasn't in love with my manuscript anymore).  After shelving it for good, I was also surprised to find myself full of writing drive, but empty of new ideas (it was like being thrown into the dating pool again with no clue of what I wanted).  I hadn't experienced writer’s block before—there had always been something to fix, rewrite, or retry. Starting from scratch had been so long ago . . .

Knowing I needed to try something different [and also because it was late winter and I desperately needed to get out of the house], I signed up for a writing course—specifically a memoir writing course. At the very least, I figured it would be good for me to record some of my life’s events for my family.

This is what I learned:

-Writing groups/classes are fun. This is kind of obvious, but it’s important because it was a good reminder to me that writing should be fun and engaging—why do we write if not to entertain, uplift, share and/or help people think deeply?

-Everybody has stories, secrets, and really difficult things they go through.  But we can still relate to each other. I learned things about my memoir group I would never normally know, and we all have very different lives. By the end of the six weeks, I loved and respected every one of them deeply.

-Sometimes you have to dig deep.  The first in-class assignment was to write the story of our lives from our birth to that day in ten minutes. After reading our rush-writes aloud to one another, we repeated the exercise without rewriting anything we had already written. By the third rush-write, I was remembering things I had forgotten, details I hadn't thought about in years. Which leads me to my next point:

-Everyone has experiences they can pull from.  I spent my childhood in a Welsh village full of characters—like my best friend’s mum who was beautiful but had crooked front teeth (hello British dental care), or the crazy old lady we called Mrs. Spitfire because she walked in the middle of the road and spat on the cars of the drivers who honked at her, or the friend I lived with as a missionary who would sigh dreamily and swoon a breathy, “Thank you, Heavenly Father,” to the sky anytime anything remotely lucky/good happened to us.  These characters are practically begging to be written about!

-I need to live in order to write. Writing is generally a solitary experience. There are times I want to just lock myself in a room and write. But I’m no Emily Dickinson. I need to get out and try new things, meet new people. Aspects of my writing have to come from my life, my experiences, and my ideas, otherwise I feel like a fraud.

Memoir writing was great for my writer’s block. And working on my craft with others was good for my soul.  It was like therapy.

But enough about me (and my therapy).

What do you do to combat writer’s block? 

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Emily Manwaring spent her childhood in Wales, her adolescence in Utah and the time since in England and New Hampshire respectively. She has a degree in English Literature from BYU and currently lives in Northern Utah with her husband and children.  She likes to sleep [mostly she just misses it], read, and write [this makes her sound very lazy].  She is currently working on a picture book series. 

Friday, October 10, 2014

Confidence


Every so often, I'll read a line in a book that strikes me so deeply that I have to stop. And think. And let it sink in. This happened to me about a week ago when I was reading Breakfast at Tiffany's by Truman Capote. It was going along fine, and I was enjoying the story but not totally enthralled. And then, the line, spoken by Holly Golightly in a rare moment of wisdom:

"Anyone who ever gave you confidence, you owe them a lot."

That may be the only line from the book that stays in my memory. The whole story is fascinating (although not totally my cup of tea), but I'm glad Capote wrote it for that line alone. I put the book down and sat there, stunned and touched and totally grateful.

As writers, we ride the confidence roller coaster. It is fascinating to watch beginners at workshops who are supremely confident in their writing ability (which is great!), and to hear the honest and heartfelt expressions of self-doubt from even the most celebrated and successful writers. It's a little like that amazing level of confidence we have as kids (see photo) that's harder to hold onto as adults.

I think I do my best writing when I'm at or near the top of the confidence roller coaster. But the roller coaster analogy breaks down (which is much safer than an actual roller coaster breaking down) when we realize that we can take some control over our confidence level. We're not just harnessed in and destined to follow the rails. We take control partly by changing our own attitude, and partly by recognizing the wisdom in a quote that bears repeating:

"Anyone who ever gave you confidence, you owe them a lot."

When I read that line, the first people I thought of were my parents. I was so lucky to have parents who made me believe I could do anything, and still seem to think it's true to this day. And the second people I thought of, in all honesty, were my critique partners.

We've had some great posts recently by Erin and Helen about finding writing friends and making connections with other writers, and it's hard to overstate how important this can be in keeping your confidence up. Real writing friends will give you real confidence, the kind that comes not from empty praise but from honest assessment and encouragement. The kind who believe in your talent and your stories and your ability to make the time for writing and help you believe in those things too.

If you haven't yet found the writing partners who give you confidence, keep looking. And if you have found them, let them know how grateful you are for the profound gift they've given you; the one they continue to give.

Like, maybe write a blog post about it. :)

To Tasha, Rosalyn, Erin, Helen, Jenn, Ann, Jennifer, Jeannie, Kari, Dee, Hay, Jeni, and especially Joan: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I owe you a lot. *enormous, confident hugs*

Elaine Vickers is a mom of three (including Supergirl from the photo above, who is much more grown up now but still very confident.) She writes middle grade and chapter books and teaches college chemistry. Elaine does, that is. Not Supergirl. Elaine is represented by Ammi-Joan Paquette of EMLA. The real Supergirl likely represents herself.